The gap between the rich and the poor is becoming wider; the rich are becoming richer and the poor are even getting poorer. Some people think that governments are responsible for this issue, and others think it is the responsibility of individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Recently, the difference between poor and wealthy

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has been

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, making

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gap

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wider. Some

people

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argue that the

goverment

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government

should take some measures to solve

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issue

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,

while

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others believe that individuals are responsible. I

stronglly

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strongly

agree

by

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former

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the former

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view

and

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, and

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in the following

both

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, both

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views will be discussed.

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with, the

government

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have to play an important role

to address

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in addressing

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this

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problem.

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, the

government

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must define some laws to support poor families.

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, many of

depriaved familes

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deprived families

can not afford their basic needs

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such

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, such

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as food

or

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, or

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even

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apply

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some of them are

homeless

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even homeless

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.

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subsids

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subsidies

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to

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this

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these

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famileis

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families

is the main

resposiblity

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responsibility

of the

government

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.

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,

unfortunatly

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unfortunately

children

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are

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apply

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rised

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raised

in

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depriaved

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deprived

homes

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do have

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have not

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an equal opportunity in their lives.

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, the free school and college funds should be donated to educate

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this

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these

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childern

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children

, which ultimately

help

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helps

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them to get

a

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high salary

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high-salary

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jobs.

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however

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, other

people

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believe that

individual

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individuals

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may stop or revise

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trend.

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of

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opinion stated , hard

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and money

mangament khowledge

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management knowledge

are the main factors that contribute to

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this

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issue

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.

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these are

noticable

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noticeable

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most

of

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apply

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the

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situations,

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is not a

logic

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logical

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solution. For

exmaple

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example

,

people

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in a country with

the

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a

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higher rate of inflation

often

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are often

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unable to cover

thier

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their

basic

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needs

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need

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need,

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let alone

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reduce

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gap. In conclusion,

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the gap between the rich and poor has

been

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grown, the

government

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may tackle

this

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issue

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by considering

subsidys

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subsidies

to poor families and donating funds to

thier

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their

children.

Individuals

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Individuals'

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efforts to solve

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issue

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will not be

to

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sucssessfull

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successful

.