The table below shows the information about medical care in three European countries between 1980 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table below shows the information about medical care in three European countries between 1980 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The table compares the information about medical care in three different countries,

such

Linking Words

as Austria,France and Germany , between 20 years.

Overall

Linking Words

while

Linking Words

doctors and hospital beds were increased in

this

Linking Words

period, the number of patients who stayed in hospitals fell. Physicians, in Austria, were at 0,8 per 1000 people at the beginning, after which they started to increase to 1.0 over 20 years.

However

Linking Words

, in France,it was at 2,4 and fell gradually to 2,2 in 1990,

then

Linking Words

it experienced a slight change to 3,8 in 2000 . In Sweden,

this

Linking Words

figure started at 3,6 and dropped to 3,0.

Next,

Linking Words

it experienced a gradual increase to 3,8 in 2000. Hospital beds in Australia were at 1,4

after

Linking Words

this

Linking Words

trend climbed suddenly to 3,1 in 1990. In 2000, it was at 3,7. In the second country, it stayed stable at 6,4 during 10 years, but it increased a little to 6.9 in 2000. The average stay in hospitals has fallen from time to time. In Austria, it was at 18 days , and

this

Linking Words

trend went down gradually to 6,but in 2000 it rose steadily to 8.

This

Linking Words

proportion at the beginning in France was

Change preposition

apply

show examples

9 , later it declined to 7 , and eventually in 2000 it was at 5. In Sweden, it was at 23 and it plummeted to 18,after it increased from 18 to 21 in 1990 and 2000.

makemoneyizzy16

Aug 4, 2025

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

▼

Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.

▼

Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 3 times.

▼

Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 5 times.

▼

Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 3 times.

▼

Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 3 times.

▼

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

8
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

230 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

7
band
In some countries, younger people are neglecting their right to vote. What problems does this cause and what are some of the possible solutions?
In certain parts of the world, the younger generation is not using their right to vote.
6.5
band
Many people like to go on holiday abroad, while other believes it is better to visit places within their own country. Discuss both of view and give your opinion.
Although some people tend to visit another country for a holiday to experience something new, others feel that it is better to spend the holiday in local places in terms of economic reasons. Personally, I agree with the idea of going on holiday abroad.
7
band
Nowadays, there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development. Some people think it is harmful to invidividuals and to society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the modern era, with the proliferation of media transportation, a host of serious issues are broadcasted and updated. Some people argue that negative news reports have an adverse bearing on citizens. I agree with this perspective and the reasons will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
6.5
band
Nowdays many people choose to be self employed rather than to work for a company or organisation why might this be this case ? What could be the disadvantages of being self employed.
In recent times, an increasing number of people are choosing to work for themselves rather than being employees of organisations. I believe this preference may be because of its flexible working hour structure and potential to earn more .However, this working structure has its own set of drawbacks as well.
6.5
band
some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is commonly believed that to unite all people from different cultures and ages together with musicmusic. I agree with the statement because this music will teach another language, promote empathy, and celebrate diversity.

The table below shows the information about medical care in three European countries between 1980 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

In some countries, younger people are neglecting their right to vote. What problems does this cause and what are some of the possible solutions?

Many people like to go on holiday abroad, while other believes it is better to visit places within their own country. Discuss both of view and give your opinion.

Nowadays, there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development. Some people think it is harmful to invidividuals and to society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowdays many people choose to be self employed rather than to work for a company or organisation why might this be this case ? What could be the disadvantages of being self employed.

some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?