The line graph shows how much money overseas visitors spent in the UK from 1980 - 2010 and the pie charts show the reasons for their visits in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The data illustrates how much cash was spent by visitors in the United Kingdom between 1980 and 2010. The pie chart displays the reasons for their travel to the UK in 1980 and 2010.

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1995 , and the lowest is from 1980 and 1985. The number one reason for their visits was vacation, and it was the highest for both the years 1980 and 2010. The money that was spent by overseas visitors fluctuated throughout the years. It started roughly at 8000 and ended a little over 10500. It had a massive increase between 1993 and 1996, with almost 3000 million reaching 12000.

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it declined to almost 10000.

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at approximately 10500. The top three reasons for visiting are holiday, business, and visiting friends or relatives. The holiday visits decreased from 1980 and 2010 by 5 per cent.

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, the business and visiting friends or relatives both got an increase

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2.1 and 9.5

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