The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The information specified in the bar chart illustrates the way most
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families should manage their weekly salary, measured as a percentage amount, that they have been
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given
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1968 and 2018. At first glance, it is evident that there were eight items, which have been devoted as expenditures. Another interesting point is that the food had the highest
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of spending,
while
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personal goods and fuel and power had the lowest figure, vice versa.
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with, food, as the most favourable stuff,
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been included exactly, 35% of weekly income in 1968,
whereas
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the
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housing
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been just 10% of
this
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budget in the same year.
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, in 2018, there was an uptrend between
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food and housing figures, with about
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one-fifths
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and near it. With regard to
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(Fuel and power) and clothes, as can be seen,
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years witnessed a growth, from almost one in twenty and ten
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.
Besides
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it is clear that
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household chores
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had the same portion for
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1968 and 2018 of around eight
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. It is
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that
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both
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personal goods and trains
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devoted
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the same as household goods in 1968.
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the
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transportation
and leisure saw a sharp increase from approximately 15% to over one in five per cent in 2018, but
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, there was a marginal
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close to
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words both with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • compare
  • spending patterns
  • allocated
  • weekly income
  • significant changes
  • essential items
  • food
  • housing
  • clothing
  • leisure
  • communication
  • increase
  • decrease
  • twofold rise
  • substantial increase
  • quadrupling
  • declined
  • food and drink
  • slight increase
  • prioritizing
  • necessities
  • transitioned
  • portio
  • non-essential items
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