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The table below gives information about the daily cost of water per person in five different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about the daily cost of water per person in five different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the daily expenditure of
water
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 expenditure per person. The casts are measured in cents, and the daily average in percentages in five different countries.
Overall
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, the
cost
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 exhibits a distinct trend in all countries.
While
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 Tanzania has the highest
cost
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 of
water
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 consumed per day, the US has the lowest.
This
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 shows a significant difference between countries in terms of
water
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 spending.
To begin
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 with, Tanzania is recorded as having the highest
cost
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 with 6.4 cents every day,
while
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 the US pay only 0.85 cents, which is the lowest
cost
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. Focusing on the daily average, 5.7% is the average in Tanzania and 0.0062% in the US.
This
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 highlights how
water
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 can be more expensive in some regions compared to others. Meanwhile, Uganda accounted to be the second country in
water
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cost
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 with a daily
cost
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 of 4.1, an average percentage of 3.2%.
In addition
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, only 1.1% and 0.013% average
cost
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 in Pakistan and the UK, respectively. These figures indicate how
water
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 expenses vary widely depending on the country’s economic situation

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, cost with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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