You are a member of an international students club.The club is organising an event to celebrate popular food from around the world. Write a letter to event organiser ,Luis.In your lette; Offer to make a popular dish from your country Describe what this dish is Explain why it should be include in the event

Dear Luis, I would like to congratulate

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the event that you are

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to celebrate popular dishes from around the world. Basically,I am from Pakistan and

this

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country

famous

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is famous

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for

variety

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its variety

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of food.People like to eat delicious cuisines

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both special events and days.I would love to contribute to

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special

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"Biryani" for

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event.

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is famous in my state.

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,there are different varieties of "Biryani",which use Basmati rice and meat(chicken,

beaf

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beef

).The spices are

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dish,

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every person

have

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their own method to make

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.It is known for its rich taste,bright colour and strong aroma. From my perspective,it should be included in your menu,and

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am sure it will attract a lot of attention and appreciation at the event.

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spicy in taste but all around the world,people will admire

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. Thank you for your consideration,and I am waiting for your response. Yours sincerely, Rabia Rizwan.

riabia123

Aug 6, 2025

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You provided a good description of the dish Biryani.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

150 words

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