The chart below shows the percentage of females aged 16-25 in a particular country who participated in sports, compared with the percentage of people who watched them in 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of females aged 16-25 in a particular country who participated in sports, compared with the percentage of people who watched them in 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the percentage of females aged 16-25 in a particular country who participated in sports, compared with the percentage of people who watched them in 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph shows data for females between 16 to 26 who participated in sports from different countries.
Overall
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, in the six
categores
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categories
, most of them show that they prefer watching,more than participating . First of all, tennis has the highest watching rate with 60%.and,
with
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and with
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only 30% participants,
then
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comes basketball with 55% watchers and 50% participants.After that comes the
theared
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apply
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highest rated sport
with
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, with
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a watching amount of 20% is gymnastics , and participates number is 8%.
On the other hand
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, golf has a high participing 30% , but only a 10% watching estimate
, after
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. After
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that comes badminton and horse riding and racing , with no big differences 11participating and 5 watching
rate
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rates
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for badminton ,and 5 watching rate and 2% participation for horse riding and racing.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • demographics
  • participation rates
  • viewership
  • temporal trends
  • societal attitudes
  • barriers to entry
  • female athletes
  • notable discrepancies
  • speculate
  • reflect
  • influence
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