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The line graph compares the population growth in India and China from 2000 and gives projections until 2050, based on data from the UN Population Division.

The line graph compares the population growth in India and China from 2000 and gives projections until 2050, based on data from the UN Population Division.
The given line graph illustrates the difference in the changes of the number of citizens in two countries,
China
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 and
India
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, beginning with information from the past and continuing into the future with an estimation until 2050.
Overall
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,
while
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India
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 started with a lower figure in 2000, possessing approximately one thousand
million
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 citizens compared to PRC, which had a larger population, having around 1.25
billion
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, it is expected to surpass the Chinese population by 2050, with about 1600
million
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 inhabitants, as opposed to 1400
million
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 in
China
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, showing a significant shift in cultural trends.
To begin
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 with, from 2000 to 2020,
India
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's demographics documented a steady increase, reaching nearly 1.32
billion
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 residents,
whereas
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China
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 experienced a slower growth with 1410
million
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 subjects.
Following
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this
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, the two countries are anticipated to meet in 2030, each recording roughly 1.45
billion
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 residents.
In contrast
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,
although
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China
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 used to be dominant in terms of the nation's populace, it is predicted not only to decline steadily in population, but
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 to be exceeded by
India
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 from 2030 to 2050, arriving at 1.4 and 1.6
billion
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 inhabitants, respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words china, india, million, billion with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • line graph
  • compare
  • population growth
  • India
  • China
  • projections
  • data
  • year
  • significant
  • shift
  • trends
  • stabilize
  • challenges
  • opportunities
  • larger
  • faster
  • highlight
  • change
  • show
  • expect
  • rate
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