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The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country.

The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country.
The provided bar charts illustrate the proportion of four different types of
films
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 released and the total
sales
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 of tickets in two different
years
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1996
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, 1996
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 and
2006
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2006,
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 in a country. The categories of
films
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 are
drama
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, comedy,
fantasy
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, and romance. At a fleeting glance, it is evident that the
percentage
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 of released
films
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 and ticket
sales
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 is higher in the year 2000 than in 1996. The maximum number of
drama
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films
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 was released in 2000 than in 1996,
whereas
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 the
percentage
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 of ticket
sales
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 was almost equal in both
years
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.
According to
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 the provided information, it can be observed that there is almost 5% difference between
drama
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, comedy, and
fantasy
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 film categories in both
years
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. In the year 2000, all three types of
films
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 were released with a significant increase. Almost 25 per cent of
drama
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 movies were released in 1996,
whereas
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 in 2000, it increased by 10 per cent , which was 35% respectively.
Furthermore
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, the making of romantic movies was equal and had a low
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as
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compared to other categories. Turning our attention to the second set of data,
fantasy
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 and romance movies had almost the same
percentage
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 of cinema ticket
sales
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 , with the figure of 5 per cent in two separate
years
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, with
fantasy
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films
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 reaching
this
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 figure in 1996 and romance
films
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 in 2000.
Additionally
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, approximately 23% of tickets were sold out in 2000, which accounted for the highest proportion.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words films, sales, years, drama, fantasy, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 4 times.
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