The graph below shows the percentage of Australians that exported to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the percentage of Australians that exported to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph illustrates the percentage of Australian

exports

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Japan

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, the US,

China

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, and India between 1990 and 2012.

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exports

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China

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saw a dramatic rise and eventually overtook the other countries,

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exports

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Japan

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declined steadily. In 1990,

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accounted for the largest share of Australian

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at around 28%, but

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figure gradually decreased to just under 20% by 2012. The US followed a different pattern

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it started at slightly above 10%, fluctuated in the first decade,

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dropped significantly to around 5% in 2010 before experiencing a small increase

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of the period.

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China

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and India had much lower figures at the beginning, both close to 2%.

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China

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's export share increased sharply from 2000 onward, surpassing

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in 2008 and reaching nearly 30% in 2012

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the highest among all. India

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experienced steady growth, ending the period at around 7%, though it remained the lowest throughout

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Vocabulary: Replace the words exports, japan, china with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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4 paragraphs

158 words

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