You are having some problems with hygiene at your new gym. Write a letter to the manager of the gym. In your letter, ● describe when you enrolled ● describe the issues d You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with

hygiene

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the hygiene

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at your new gym. I became a member of your gym about 1 week

back

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ago

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. A friend of mine recommended

to join

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joining

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gym

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the gym

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, and he has very positive

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apply

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his

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apply

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feedback

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your

sport

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sports

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club and has

recommend

Wrong verb form

recommended

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it to

myself

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and a number of friends. During my

last

Linking Words

visit, the shower room was absolutely dirty. In my

opinion

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opinion,

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it was never cleaned up.

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Also

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Also,

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I want to bring

your

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to your

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attention a problem I have encountered with a toilet behind the front desk. The toilet was completely broken, even I could not open the door to enter

inside

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apply

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. Water was everywhere, I think

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the waterpipes

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waterpipes

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water pipes

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was

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were

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disconnected from

main

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the main

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water boiler.

Due to

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this

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these

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problems with hygiene, I want to ask for

the

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refund

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of my

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money for the club

member

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membership

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pass.

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Aug 8, 2025

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structure

Use one clear idea in each part. Start with when you joined, then note the problems, then say what you want.

language

Use short, easy words. If you can, give exact date you joined and exact places of the problems.

tone

Keep a formal tone and add a closing line, like 'Yours faithfully' and your name.

grammar

Check small mistakes in word use, grammar and spelling so you sound clear.

content

The letter shows what bad things happened and the wish to get money back.

format

The letter tries to be formal and polite.

content

It mentions both enrolment time and the issues.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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4
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
22
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

141 words

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You are having some problems with hygiene at your new gym. Write a letter to the manager of the gym. In your letter, ● describe when you enrolled ● describe the issues d You do NOT need to write any addresses.

The Closing

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