You are having some problems with hygiene at your new gym.
Write a letter to the manager of the gym. In your letter,
● describe when you enrolled
● describe the issues
● suggest some solutions
Dear sir/madam
Through
letter,I wish to highlight a crucial problem and a peculiar situation that I am undergoing
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cleaning facility in
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.My name is Shubham
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,I joined
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membership
month.
First and foremost,
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To make the task clear, add a small request for action at the end, such as asking the manager to fix the problem or to speak with you about it.
Put the notes in three short parts: 1) when you joined, 2) the problems, 3) what you want the manager to do. Use simple, kind words and short sentences.
You tell when you joined (last month).
You name the problem as a cleaning issue.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.