You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board. Write a letter to Mr. Walker, and Give your reason for writing Tell about your education Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job.

Dear Mr.Walker, I am writing to apply for the position of quality assurance manager, advertised on

university's

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the university's

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notice board. I

belive

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believe

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my skills and experience make me a

suitabable

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suitable

candidate for

this

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role. I have three years of experience working in a retail store, where I got strong communication and problem-solving skills. I am confident in handling customer complaints,processing payments, and providing

exellent

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excellent

service. I am

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comfortable working with computers and can learn new systems quickly. I am available to work full-time, including weekends, and I can start immediately. Please find my CV attached for your review. I

wouild

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would

be grateful for the opportunity to attend an interview and discuss how I can join

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apply

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your team. Thank you for considering my application. Yours faithfully, Max Trump

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Aug 9, 2025

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structure

Split the letter into 3 short parts: intro, your study and work, and why you fit the job. Use clear lines.

grammar

Check spelling and little mistakes like believe, suitable, university's, would, join.

paragraphing

Keep to 2 or 3 small paragraphs. Each one has one main idea.

content

Add clear facts about your study and any QA work or tasks you did.

tone

Keep a formal feel. Start with Dear Mr. Walker and end with Yours faithfully.

tone

Polite end and ask for an interview.

content

Clear aim to get the job.

format

Formal greeting and closing.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

128 words

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