The maps show Pacific Railway Station station in 1998 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The maps show Pacific Railway Station station in 1998 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps show Pacific Railway Station station in 1998 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The maps depict how the Pacific Railway Station looked in 1998 and how it looks in the present.
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, there are more shops, facilities, and
platforms
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now than before. In 1998, in the
center
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centre
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of the station, there were the toilets. To the east, there were four train
platforms
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. To the southwest, a café, a shop, and the ticket office had been constructed. In the current days, the train station has
had
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undergone
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modifications to
give
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provide
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better installations and amenities for the users. The toilets in the
center
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centre
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have been demolished, and now a restaurant and two shops have been added. To the east, the old four
platforms
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are still there. To the west, three new
platforms
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were established. To the southwest, a new supermarket has been erected, and to the southeast, we find the same café. The ticket office was developed and is now bigger than in 1998, with one more entrance to give better service.

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Linking words: Add more linking words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 83%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words platforms with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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