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The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. t

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. t
The two maps illustrate
village
Correct article usage
the village
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 in Norbiton that will be
develop
Wrong verb form
developed
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 in future .
Overall
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, there are many bildings will be constructed around the roundabout.
Linking Words
Also
Add a comma
Also,
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 a road will be
add
Wrong verb form
added to
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 cross the river
reach
Correct word choice
and reach
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 to housing.New facilities
such
Linking Words
 as
market
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a market
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 ,
school
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a school
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 and
medical
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a medical
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 centre will be
constract
Correct your spelling
constructed
.
Linking Words
However
Add a comma
However,
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 all the factories will be
destroy
Wrong verb form
destroyed
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in
Change preposition
on
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 the site. First and foremost, in the north of
roundabout
Correct article usage
the roundabout
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 , a new road will be
constract
Correct your spelling
constructed
 and cross the river to reach
to
Change preposition
apply
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a big housing
in
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area in
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farmerland
Fix capitalization
Farmerland
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.
In addition
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, there is a new street in the
westnorth
Correct your spelling
northwest
 of
roundabout
Correct article usage
the roundabout
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will
Correct pronoun usage
that will
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 be
add
Wrong verb form
added
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 to lead to two
bildings
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buildings
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.
Moreover
Linking Words
, the factories will be replaced with housing , on the east of
Correct article usage
the roundabout
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roundabout
Punctuation problem
roundabout,
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 the road will be
connect
Wrong verb form
connected
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the
Change preposition
to the
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bilding
Correct your spelling
building
withe
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with
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Correct article usage
the playgrund
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playgrund
Correct your spelling
playground
 and school

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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