The charts below show what UK graduate and post graduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.

The charts below show what UK graduate and post graduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show what UK graduate and post graduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.
The given bar charts
shows
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show
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the total number of graduate and post-graduate
students
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who do not wish to continue as
a
Correct article usage
apply
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full-time
worker
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workers
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in the United Kingdom in 2008. These
students
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have been divided into four categories
part-time
Punctuation problem
: part-time
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job, voluntary work,
further
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studies and unemployment. Starting with the graduates, the most common future career path is to
choosen
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choose
continue
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to continue
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to
further
Linking Words
higher study
which
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, which
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involves almost 30,000.
Whereas
Linking Words
, the least popular is the voluntary work
with
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, with
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only 3500 individuals.
Additionally
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, part-time
are
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workers are
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the second
where
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, where
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around 18000
are
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apply
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working roughly. Sadly,
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students
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apply
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who are
unemployed
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of unemployed
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are
Verb problem
students is
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a little
bit
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apply
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more than 16,000.
One
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On
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the other hand, for post-student
further
Linking Words
study
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study,
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continue
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continuing
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and voluntary work
both
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apply
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are the least common, with
resepctively
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respectively
,
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apply
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2725 and 345 people.
However
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, part-time opportunities are more popular in
this
Linking Words
group
reaching
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, reaching
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up to 2535
which
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, which
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is only less than 200 who continue
study more
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studying
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.
Last
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,
unfortunately
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unfortunately,
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the unemployment was reached
to
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apply
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1625
students
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".
Vocabulary: Replace the words students with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • after
  • leaving
  • college
  • graduate
  • postgraduate
  • not
  • full-time
  • work
  • part-time
  • further
  • study
  • training
  • travel
  • unemployment
  • caring
  • family
  • gap
  • year
  • data
  • chart
  • show
  • indicate
  • compare
  • difference
  • pattern
  • trend
  • rise
  • fall
  • stay
  • increase
  • decrease
  • reason
  • because
  • due to
  • as a result
  • effect
  • impact
  • career
  • skill
  • earnings
  • future
  • prospects
  • number
  • percent
  • most
  • many
  • some
  • fewer
  • similar
  • different
  • policy
  • problem
  • solution
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