The first car appeared on British road 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Undoubtly
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Undoubtedly
,
car
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the car
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is one of the greatest invention on earth, which improve our
life
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lives
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and
make
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enables
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us be able to travel to
a
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apply
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far
place
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places
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.
As
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the innovation of technology, there are a variety of
type
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types
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of vehicles coming out to market and
provide
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providing
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us
different
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with different
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selections that meet our needs.
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,
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apply
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the
popurlarity
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popularity
of
cars
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causes a
amount
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number
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of negative
result
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results
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as well. To solve these
problem
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problems
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,
government
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the government
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set up
restristion
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restrictions
to control car ownership and use, which I
am
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apply
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totally agree with. In modern society, people
couldn't
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can't
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live without
cars
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. We rely on
car
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cars
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in a range of
use
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ways
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with
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in
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our daily life,
such
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as
transport
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,
carry
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carrying
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huge items and even
accommodate
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accommodation
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.
However
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, it
also
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causes lots of serious issues.
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,
excess
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an excessive
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amount
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number
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of
cars
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may lead to traffic
probelms
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problems
and
lack
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a lack
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of parking
space
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spaces
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, which
make
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makes
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us take extra time to
transport
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and
finding for
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find
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parking lots. To handle the inconvenience, the
auotherity
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authority
have
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has
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announced
regulation
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regulations
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about the limited ownership of
cars
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. By the practice, people could own
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cars as many
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as many cars
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as they wish, which may
encourge
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encourage
them to change their
transport
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habit
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habits
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from driving to taking
the
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apply
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public transportation and could eliminate the emission of
green
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greenhouse
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gases.
Besides
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, using alternative
form
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forms
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of transportation,
such
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as buses,
train
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trains
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or
underground
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the underground
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,
is
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there is
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no need to
be worried
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worry
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about being late
as a result
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of getting
stucked
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stuck
into
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in
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a traffic jam or searching for parking spaces. In conclusion, we are
over-relied
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overly reliant
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on driving our own
cars
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since we often think of the
convience
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convenience
.
Whereas
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, there are various
of
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apply
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alternative methods for
transport
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which could make our life and environment better.
Therefore
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, I suggest that it is a
benefitical
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beneficial
policy to limit the number of
cars
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.

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task
State a clear position in the first paragraph and keep it, with three reasons in the body.
coherence
Use linking words to show how ideas are connected and to guide the reader.
language
Check spelling and grammar to avoid mistakes that hide meaning and to improve form.
task
The writer has a clear view that controls on cars should be used.
coherence
The essay link car use to its problems like traffic and parking.
content
Examples are used to show the idea of limits and transport choice.
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