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The bar chart below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported (in tonnes) by Canada, the UK, the USA, and Germany in 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported (in tonnes) by Canada, the UK, the USA, and Germany in 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates how much
tea
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 and
coffee
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is
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are
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 imported from four developed countries.
Overall
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, the United Kingdom was the biggest importer of
tea
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 among the four countries;
however
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, the lowest importation of
tea
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 and
coffee
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 was dedicated to
Canada
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 and the UK, respectively. Germany and
Canada
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 experienced a relatively similar pattern in
import
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the import
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 of
tea
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. The largest proportion of the imported
tea
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 was allocated to the UK,
according to
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 160,000
tonnes
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, followed by the USA (just below 120,000
tonnes
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).
In contrast
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, Germany and
Canada
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 bought significantly smaller quantities of
tea
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,
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 the former was four times less than the leading country in the chart, and the latter was 20,000
tonnes
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. Despite the fact that Germany purchased the largest amount of
coffee
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, which was about just above 40000
tonnes
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, Britain allocated its budget to import 20000
tonnes
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 of
coffee
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.
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, the USA and
Canada
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 experienced the same exact number, which was 40000
tonnes
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words tea, coffee, canada, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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