You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, explain why you have changed your job describe your new job tell him/her your other news

Dear

purnima

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Purnima

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, I hope you are doing well. It's been

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while

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a while

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since we

last

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talked. I want to share

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some

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exciting news with you that I got my new position in a renowned organisation in Vancouver. I left my previous job

because of

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for

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some reasons.

Firstly

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, it took lots of time to reach

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my destination, which wastes my precious hours of the day.

Secondly

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, I felt that my

last

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position didn't give me more opportunities for learning new skills.

However

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, I started looking for

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new employment

for gaining

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to gain

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experience in new and different areas. My new job is at Amazon,

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and I

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work as an operations associate. My main responsibilities are to update information,

coordinating

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coordinate

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shipment

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shipments

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managing

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manage

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inventory and

ensuring

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ensure

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delivery on time.

Apart from

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this

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, there are employees from different

backgroun

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backgrounds

and cultures, we speak with each other during challenges and spend leisure time efficiently. They

all are

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very supportive, which makes the environment more pleasant.

Besides

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this

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, I've

also

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started attending a yoga class near my home, which helps me

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unwind

myself

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after a hectic day.

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, I'm

also

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planning a short trip with some friends next month to de-stress. I hope everything is going well with you

too

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, too

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. Please write back and tell me what

are

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your plans ahead. Take care, Amritpal Kaur

kauramritpal8916

Aug 14, 2025

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task response

Explain more about why you leave the old job and add a bit more detail about the new work.

coherence

Put one idea in each paragraph and use small link words to join ideas.

grammar and punctuation

Some long lines makes it hard to read. Break them in two.

spelling and capitalization

Cap and spell names like Purnima, Amazon, and Vancouver.

tone

Keep a kind tone and use simple talk for a friend.

content

You tell all three parts of the task.

coherence

You use link words to show order.

tone

The tone is warm and kind.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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10
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
18
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

218 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

I started a new job
I left my old job
I changed my job
why I changed job
I wanted to learn more
I wanted a better fit
I wanted a better work life balance
the old job did not fit
the new job is a good fit
title: project helper
I work with a team
my main tasks are
plan small projects
keep track of tasks
help the team
talk to clients
answer emails
keep files in order
the work is busy
I like it
I learn new things every day
the office is near my home
the people are friendly
I am happy with the move
my other news
I joined a weekend club
I cook more at home
I plan to visit
write back
take care
your friend

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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