The line graph below shows the unemployment rates of three countries between 1993 and 2007

The line graph below shows the unemployment rates of three countries between 1993 and 2007
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The line graph below shows the unemployment rates of three countries between 1993 and 2007
The line graph provides information about how many people (in %) were unemployed in the United Kingdom, the rest of Europe and Japan, in the period from 1993 to 2007.
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, figures for Europe and the UK declined over the years,
while
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Japan
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it
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experienced non-significant growth. As the graph shows, Japan had the lowest rate compared to others
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it was 2% in 1993,
then
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the number of unemployed people grew slightly to 5% in 2003, and
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fell to approximately 4% in 2007. The UK started from 11% of the unemployed population in 1993, after that it experienced
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rapid decline to 5% in 2005, when it was the same as the Japanese figure. Trend ended with a slow increase to around 6% in 2007. In the rest of Europe, the unemployment rate was about 9% in 1993. It
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increased slightly and reached a peak of just over 10% in 1997. After that, the figure began to decline to about 8% in 2001. From
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point, unemployment experienced stagnation with small changes, before it decreased again to around 7% in 2007.

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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • the
  • unemployment rate
  • rise
  • falls
  • go up
  • go down
  • increase
  • decrease
  • grow
  • drop
  • rise and fall
  • peak
  • trough
  • fluctuate
  • stable
  • steady
  • gradual
  • sharp
  • slow
  • significant
  • highest
  • lowest
  • higher than
  • lower than
  • in general
  • overall
  • year
  • years
  • period
  • compare
  • contrast
  • as compared with
  • similarly
  • whereas
  • but
  • yet
  • and
  • also
  • finally
  • in 1993
  • in 2007
  • throughout
  • between
  • by 2007
  • during
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