Air traffic is increasingly leading to more noise pollution and airport construction. One reason for this is the growth in low-cost passenger flight, often to hold holiday destination. Some people say that government should try to reduce air traffic by taxing it more heavily. Do you agree or disagree?

It is true that
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pollution has increased rapidly compared to the past decades. Some individuals think that the government can lessen
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traffic by imposing a higher tax on it. I disagree with
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notion. By implementing a heavy tax on flights , not only lower economic growth but
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interferes the public freedom, and affects the peace and harmony among nations as well. One of the main reasons for disagreement is that most of the nations are welcoming tourists to their regions. Tourism brings job opportunities for people and improves the economic situation of their citizens as well. In most of the regions, people are highly dependent on
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tourists, and if the officials put a higher tax on
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flights,
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nobody will visit anywhere.
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, Goa, Himachal Pradesh, and Shimla are
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attractive tourist destinations
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higher taxation on flights will definitely affect them, and
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, these places will lose their popularity.
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, every individual has the right to think freely
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and can visit anywhere they want. We know that, new generation prefers to study abroad to fulfil their dreams, but intense taxes could make international education unaffordable, and force them to study in their home country, where limited spots will be available to get enrolment in prestigious universities.
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, international travel fosters cultural exchange, understanding, and peaceful relations among nations. Undoubtedly, the Government
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help those people
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who are from distinct backgrounds, and helps them when they face any kind of emergency , especially
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wars, natural disasters, and scarcity of resources.
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can be possible only when the government promote global unity.
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addressing
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pollution is crucial, imposing higher taxes on
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travel is not the right solution. It would negatively affect tourism, restrict personal freedom, and weaken international cooperation. I think governments should explore more sustainable and balanced approaches to reduce environmental impact without compromising economic progress.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • noise pollution
  • airport construction
  • low-cost passenger flight
  • holiday destination
  • taxing
  • revenue
  • sustainable transportation
  • mitigation measures
  • unaffordable
  • tourism revenue
  • innovation
  • quieter
  • environmentally friendly
  • government intervention
  • public opposition
  • freedom and convenience
  • travel
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • environmental degradation
  • airport expansions
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