Some people today believe that the world increases in population is unsustainable and will eventually lead to a global crisis. Other people believe that world population increase is necessary and beneficial as it creates the growth of the world’s economy and society Discuss both these views and give your opinion

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group of people who think that the sustainability of the world depends on controlling human birth.

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others have an opinion that it will ultimately

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for the increasing demand of the global economic status and

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creates

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better society.

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tremondous

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upward inclination of the number of people born each year, it is

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the environment to produce more goods and services. Every individual

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basic needs

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Shelter, Food,

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and Education. All of

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essentials are produced mostly from

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nature

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issue of

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urbanisation

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happening

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where

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large forested areas are deforested

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of pure oxygen.

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, it is responsible for

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global warming and natural hazards

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considerbaly

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on the environment.

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, the recent natural disasters

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as earthquakes, hurricanes

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all over

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because of the over-exploitation of the natural resources

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have made the earth hollow from

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technological advancements, it is critical that

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is essential

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as the people in the group increases, they can earn a significant amount of money. Ultimately,

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families

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get

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flourished

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will bring prosperity in the community. The working class is always in demand at the global level

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they are creating employment

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. The Standard of living of the society is flourishing

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they can enjoy

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life to the fullest. In my opinion, it is crucial that there should be

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approach for the increasing population. There should be some laws by the government to control and maintain the growth. The limited amount of

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individuals

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can get the best education, employment

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it will

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in

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balance between global crisis and economic growth.

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, the population increase will create issues

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it can be solved by proper

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and usage of sustainable methods.