The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps demonstrate the current state of Bunborough village and
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plans by Autumn 2024.
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, it is planned that the transport system will be extended, and
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, all lake area facilities will be converted into a recreation area. Beginning with changes related to transport, the main changes will concern the
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erection of
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trail road through the village, including a trail station on the west side. Because of
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, some housing will be demolished so that there will be enough space for the new line stop.
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, these accommodations will be relocated to the north.
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, it is suggested that an additional road connecting the Maychester highroad with Bunborough will be opened. If we look at the plans regarding the coastline, it is noticeable that the fishing port is planned to be redeveloped into a promenade. At the same time, two new hotels will be built on both sides of a headwater.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Anticipation
  • Significant
  • Conversion
  • Commercial activities
  • Expansion
  • Enhancing
  • Bypassing
  • Congestion
  • Connectivity
  • Recreational area
  • Demolition
  • Infrastructure
  • Preservation
  • Public transportation hub
  • Encourage
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