Your children go to a local school that requires volunteers to accompany school science trips. Write a letter to the school to apply to be a volunteer. In the letter: – Introduce yourself and give details of your children who attend the school – Explain why you are interested in the position – Talk about any relevant experience that you have with children

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter with regard to the

assitance

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assistance

that your school needs

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for

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the trip you provide for the kids. I would like to say a small introduction about myself. My name is Omar, and I work as a veterinarian in a renowned hospital

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24th

street

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. I have

acouple

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a couple

of boys in your school. One of them is Ahmed

who

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passed

the

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apply

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last

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year

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exam with a perfect

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The other one is John

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born

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here in

United

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Kingdom, and he is familiar with the culture of

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town. I am eager to offer my help to your school, and I would love to tell

why

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I am interested in going out with you. My passion for instructing small kids about science is

ennormous

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enormous

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passion comes from my occupation as a veterinarian, and from my previous

part time

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job as a teacher I had past experience with teaching young kids and adolescents. I used to have a

part time

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job when I was in college to support myself. You might find

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suprising

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surprising

, but I got several recommendation letters from many parents. Yours faithfully, Omar Elazzazy

azzazy070

Aug 22, 2025

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grammar

Fix spelling and grammar. Use correct forms like 'assistance', 'a couple of', 'born', 'enormous'.

tone

Use a formal tone. Avoid casual phrases such as 'going out with you'.

structure

Make one idea per paragraph. Link ideas with short transitions.

content

Be concise and keep relevant facts. Do not add too many extra details.

content

Shows a wish to help with school science trips.

relevance

Mentions you are a vet and a local parent, which can add value.

presentation

Has a proper closing and sign-off.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

195 words

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