The charts below show the use of water for agriculture products in Australia in 2004 and values of these products to the Australian economy in the same year.

The given pie charts compare the distribution of

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used in agricultural products in Australia in 2004 with the

income

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gained from these products.

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, livestock consumed the largest

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of

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,

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vegetables were the lowest .

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, fruit provided the greatest

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, whilst a little money came from rice. Starting with the usage of

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, livestock consumed the biggest amount of

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, accounting for 36%,

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the lowest trends were rice and vegetables, only 5% and 4% of the total.

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, the dairy was the second dominant tendency, at 19% and cotton consumed 15% of

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is shown, sugar and fruit demonstrated a little similar details, 10% and 11%. In terms of

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, the most profitable figure was fruit, despite

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only 11% and representing one of the beneficial

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the rice was not efficient, accounting for only 1% of all

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. Followed by the diary, it was the second profitable figure, making up 24%. Cotton produced 13% of revenue, whilst,

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three sections displayed a similar percentage, sugar at 7%, livestock 6% and vegetables was 5%.