The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The line graph illustrates the data
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fuels in the UK in three different fuel sources over a 19-year period from the year 1981 to 2000.
Overall
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, it could be clearly seen that the highest energy production in the UK was
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Petroleum
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.
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Additionally
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the data
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natural
gas
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increased significantly over the years. In the first year,
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had the highest production at around 90%.
On the other hand
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, Natural
gas
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had the least production of fuel at nearly 40 until 1991. From 1981 to 1984, Coal significantly declined 80% to approximately 30%. In the
year
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1986 to 1990, Coal and natural
gas
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remained constant
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60% and 40% respectively.
Petroleum
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from 1988 -1990 constantly
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around 100%. By 1996, natural
gas
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moderately increased
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80% to 100% in the end,
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Coal significantly dropped
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30%.
At the end
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of the period,
Petroleum
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rose significantly to its peak at about 150%.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words petroleum, gas with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • main kinds of fuel
  • time frame
  • location
  • data
  • trends
  • increase
  • decrease
  • specific data points
  • petroleum
  • nuclear fuel
  • natural gas
  • coal
  • fluctuations
  • correlations
  • patterns
  • analyze
  • summarize
  • provide
  • general summary
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