You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another countryz. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter - explain why you want to work in the company's head office for six months - say how your work could be done while you are away - ask for his/her help in arranging it

Dear Sir, I am reaching out to ask if it would be possible to perform in the main office in future. Recently, my current position changed from casual to full-time supervisor in order to manage the online orders. No doubt I am learning plenty of
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here , but if I got the chance to
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with the team force in the head office, which would give me the opportunity to learn more about deals.
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, the time I am away , my workforce coordinator,
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, will do all the
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. I am sure that he will handle the
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responsibilities properly. I would like to request that you send an email to the main office on my behalf, so that it will be possible for me to go to the branch. I appreciate your time and assistance. Yours faithfully, Sumat.

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structure
Group ideas into three clear parts: purpose, plan, and request. Use one idea per paragraph and add a linking sentence to guide the reader.
formatting
Formal tone is appropriate for a work letter.
content
The letter includes a clear request for help.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite
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