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The table below shows the result of a survey that asked 6800 Scottish adults (aged 16 years and over) whether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months.

The table below shows the result of a survey that asked 6800 Scottish adults (aged 16 years and over) whether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months.
The table shows the
participation
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 rates in various cultural
activities
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 across different
age
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groups
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 in Scotland.
Overall
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, the youngest
group
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, 16-24 years old, exhibited the highest engagement in cultural
activities
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, with performance being the most popular,
while
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 computer-based
activities
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 were the least favoured across all
age
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 categories. For the 16-24
age
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group
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,
participation
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 in performance
activities
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such
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 as dancing or singing was the highest at 35%, significantly exceeding the rates of the 25-44
age
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group
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 22% and the 45-74
age
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group
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 17%.
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age
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group
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also
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 engaged in visual arts more frequently
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% compared to the other demographics.
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, they showed a higher involvement in writing 17% than the older
age
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groups
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. The 45-74
age
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group
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 showed the highest preference for crafts, with 22%
participation
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, exceeding the rate of the younger
group
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 17%. Cultural purchases exhibited similar rates across all
age
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groups
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, ranging from 11% to 18%. Computer-based
activities
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 had minimal
participation
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 across all
groups
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, with only 6% engagement.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words participation, activities, age, groups, group with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
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