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The chart below shows the percentage of different types of household waste that were recycled in one city between 1992 and 2002

The chart below shows the percentage of different types of household waste that were recycled in one city between 1992 and 2002
The bar chart compares how much diverse species of household waste were recycled in the city from 1992 to 2002.
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, Plastic, Cans, Paper and Glass experienced different trends in the period.
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 Glass rose significantly, Plastic remained relatively stable over time. As the graph shows, the proportion of waste produced by Plastic started at 10% in 1992,
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 a small growth to 13% in 1997, after which it remained relatively stable at 13% in 2002. Regarding recycled materials , Cans were at 19%, followed by
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 chart increased slightly. By 1992, Cans were 14%, after that it grew gradually to 30% and 40% in 1997 and 2002, respectively.
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, junk was manufactured Glass to 12% in 1992,
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 again increased to 18% in 1997,
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 highest recycled climbed dramatically.

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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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