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The maps show two different plans designed for a conference room. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps show two different plans designed for a conference room. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Two diverse plans designed for the conference room are illustrated in the map.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the
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apply
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plan
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Plan
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 A includes a higher number of tables than
the
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Plan
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B
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. In
plan
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 A, the podium
situated
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is situated
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in
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on
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 the North-western side of the room,
while
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 in
plan
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B
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, it is absent.
Place
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The place
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,
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apply
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 that provides the morning tea is at the edge of the conference room,
moves
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and moves
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 to the left corner in
plan
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B
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. Other remaining
furnitures
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furniture
 almost stays in the same place, except
a
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for a
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new desk, adjacent to the whiteboard in
plan
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B
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, and the quantity of the tables differs from 10 to 18, respectively.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words plan, b with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • rectangular
  • intimate
  • focused setting
  • versatile
  • collaborative work
  • whiteboard
  • projector
  • amenities
  • refreshment area
  • storage cabinets
  • breakout areas
  • dividers
  • group discussions
  • interactive sessions
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