The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table shows the information about the
sales
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of
coffee
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and bananas in the years 1999 and 2004 in five different European
continents
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countries
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.
Overall
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,
Switzerland
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has the most demanding market in both
coffee
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and
banana
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, constituting 3
million
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and 15
million
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, and is two times larger than the
UK
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sales
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(1.5
million
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),
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Euros), while
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while
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Sweden
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takes up the least with 0.8
million
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Euros. In 2004,
Coffee
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consumption in the
UK
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took the lead with around 20
million
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, which is the biggest than the rest added together.
Coffee
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sales
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in
Switzerland
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constitute around 6
million
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,
whereas
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Denmark, Belgium, and
Sweden
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have taken only 2
million
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, 1.7
million
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and 1
million
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respectively
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, respectively
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. Moving on to
sales
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in
Banana
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,
Switzerland
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with
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, with
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its outstanding
sales
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at 15
million
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,
whereas
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the other countries like
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UK
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the UK
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, Belgium,
Sweden
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, and Denmark remained stable at around 1
million
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, 0.6
million
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, 1.8
million
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and 2
million
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respectively.
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, in 2004,
banana
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consumption rose dramatically
at
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to
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47
million
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.
UK
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and Belgium,
on the other hand
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, increased almost six times
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, about
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5.5 and 4
million
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respectively
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, respectively
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. In conclusion, it is reasonable to believe that
Switzerland
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has
most
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the most
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popular market in both
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coffee
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the coffee
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and
banana
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industries,
while
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Sweden
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and Denmark are on the opposite downstream.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas, while".
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, coffee, switzerland, banana, million, uk, sweden with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade-labelled
  • sales figures
  • percentage increase/decrease
  • European countries
  • sales volume
  • notable trend
  • exponential growth
  • moderate rise
  • marked decline
  • comparative analysis
  • economic factors
  • consumer preferences
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