Some people think that secondary school children should study international news as one of the school subjects. Other people think that it is a waste of valuable school ti. me. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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necessary to include current actualities in the secondary school syllabus because it's required for the
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to know what's happening around the
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will enhance their
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required so that these children can develop critical reasoning. It's pertinent to mention that these
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future leaders, so engaging them with the
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from secondary
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, a recent study by SUST shows that
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children trained
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to which these
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belong
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are not appropriate to learn about
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stage is appropriate to learn social manners at first and the academic topics
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mathematics, physics
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law of nature by doing more and more practical courses
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, their brain cells are not developed yet to absorb the worldly news, rather engaging them
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their academic affairs. We can take the example of my local secondary
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where
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introduced to study foreign matters had 8% drop in
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their
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schools. So, in conclusion, I would opine that
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we should introduce these
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students
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actualities
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at a limited scale that could be
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hampering their academic track.

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structure
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