Hello Mr. Singh,
I am writing
this
letter to bring your attention to a problem in your flat. I am a tenant who Linking Words
live
in 34 Correct subject-verb agreement
lives
house
apartment in Brampton. The heating Correct your spelling
34-house
system
is not working. Use synonyms
As a result
, we have neither hot water for utilizing nor a heat Linking Words
system
for warming up our rooms.
Use synonyms
Last
week, one of my flatmates fell sick Linking Words
due to
bathing in cold water. Linking Words
Moreover
, Linking Words
It
is quite hard for us to live in the flat without having Fix capitalization
it
the
heat Correct article usage
a
system
because the temperature sometimes goes down to around -10 Use synonyms
degree
. Workers have tried many times to fix it, but they Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
are
unsuccessful in solving the issues.
I would like to recommend Wrong verb form
have been
you
Correct word choice
that you
to
install a new heating Verb problem
apply
system
. Without it, we would fall sick in Use synonyms
these
upcoming days. If the repair Correct determiner usage
the
take
Correct subject-verb agreement
takes
times
, it is my Fix the agreement mistake
time
humble
request Replace the word
humbly
if
you provide a temporary heat Change preposition
that
system
and hot water.
I am hoping that you will take appropriate action.
Yours Use synonyms
Sincerely
,
Rupinder Kaur.Fix capitalization
sincerely