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The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901.

The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901.
The table provides key information about
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the numbers
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numbers
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number
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 of
worker
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workers
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 and
factories
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 in the period between 1851 to 1901 in England and Wales
,
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.
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 The units are measured in numbers.
Overall
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. It is clear from the graph that the highest
number
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 of employees was in 1851.
In addition
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, the least
number
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 of
factories
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 was
at
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in
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 the same year,
whereas
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 the
factories
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 appeared a significant
number
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 in 1881
by
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with
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 721
factory
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factories
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.
According to
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 what is shown, over the course of 20 years, from 1851 to 1871total figure of employees had a considerable decline by more than 75%, which almost equivalent in both gender male and female,
also
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 had a notable jumped in
factories
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 in
this
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 20 years. In terms of years ranging from 1881 to 1901, a plunged saw
in
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seen in
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entire
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the total
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numbers
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number
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 of
worker
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workers
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 until reached
to
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apply
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61,000 in
totally
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total
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with
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, with
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 a
slightly decreased
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slight decrease
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 in
factories
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but
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, but
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the
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a
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 crucial
thing
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change
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happened
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occurred
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 in
female
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the female
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 group, which provided
dropped
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a drop
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 in
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number
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numbers
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 in
similar
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a similar
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 way
of
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to
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male
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the male
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 category.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words factories, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "provides" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 4 times.
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