The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to Scotland who visited four different attractions in Edinburgh

The line graph provides information on the proportion of

foriegn

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foreign

visitors to four distinct attractions in Edinburgh, Scotland

from

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1980 to 2010.

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, the most striking feature of the graph is that

castle

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is the most visited site over the 30-year period

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while

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aquarium

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the aquarium

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demonstrated an

increased

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for the first five

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,

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decreased over the next twenty

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. In

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contrast

,

zoo

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the zoo

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has a fluctuation rate during the period

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whereas

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festival

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remains relatively stable. A brief glance at the chart reveals that in 1980, around 25% of

tourist

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tourists

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visted

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visited

the castle

which

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then

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steadily

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over the next fifteen

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reaching

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a peak of roughly 45% in 1995.

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,

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trend slightly

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in 2000, which

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remains

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stable and

still

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reported as the highest

visting

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visiting

attraction in 2010 at a rate of 30%.

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,

aquarium

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the aquarium

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began at 20%

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quickliy

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quickly

rise

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to a peak of approximately 35% in 1985.

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level

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rapidly dropped to 20% in 1990

which

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continues to fall within the

nexts 20-year

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next 20 years

to just under 10% in 2010. Looking at the remaining details, there was a notable fluctuation in the

amount

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of visitors visiting the zoo. Starting from lowly 10% in 1980, that

peaks

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to

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at

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around 15%

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decreased to 10% in 1990

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this

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fluctuation continues until 2000. It

then

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increased dramatically for the next

ten year

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period to 20%.

Subsequently

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,

festival

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the festival

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accounted for 30% of visitors in

1980

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1980,

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then

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slightly

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to roughly 28% in 1995, which

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remains

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stable throughout the next fifteen

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