The table illustrates Venezuela's victims categorized by age groups and crime types such as murder, negligence, kidnapping,

The table illustrates Venezuela's

victims

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categorized

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categorised

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by age groups and crime types

such

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as murder, negligence, kidnapping, robbery and

blackmail

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, Robbery had the highest total number of

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whereas

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the total of kidnapping and

blackmail

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was almost the same.

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, negligence had the fewest

victims

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. In detail, robbery was the highest among

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young

people (4558

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) and adults (3312

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), with 1,067

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in the middle-aged group. The next two crimes were Kidnapping and

blackmail

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the former was higher than the latter, 56

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aged 15–24, and 89

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aged 25-44 . There were 110 kidnapping

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aged 0–14,

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only 4 were

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victims

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in the same group, and fewer than 8 people aged 65+ for both crimes. There were 39 negligence

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aged 0–14 and only 9 aged 65 and above.

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, between 2 and 4 people were affected in the 15–24 and 65+ groups,

while

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victims

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were recorded in the 25–44 group.

alyah.alshehri

Sep 5, 2025

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