You recently noticed a local restaurant that was offering a part-time job.
Write a letter to the restaurant's manager. In your letter,
explain that you would like to apply for the job
give some details of any relevant experience that you have
specify the days and times that would suit you
Dear
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G,
searching for
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job,
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saw your offer
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the website
, iPunctuation problem
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would love to join your
.
My name is Maryam,
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twenty fourUse the right word
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years old. I
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two languages,
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and
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.
Some of my
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that
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have
in events about the importance of education.
,
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joined to
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club during
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collageUse the right word
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periodCheck wording
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.
but not least,
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prefer
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five days a week from 8 am to 4 pm.
All respect,
Maryam aladwani
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Fix spell and grammar. Use simple form like I am and I would like the job.
Put one idea in each line. Start with your wish to apply, then talk about exp, then your days.
Be polite. Use a full closing like Yours sincerely and your name.
Give clear days and times, and check for misspelt word.
The goal to apply is clear.
You mention language and work exp.
Polite tone in parts of the letter.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.