You recently noticed a local restaurant that was offering a part-time job. Write a letter to the restaurant's manager. In your letter, explain that you would like to apply for the job give some details of any relevant experience that you have specify the days and times that would suit you

Dear
manager
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G,
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im
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I'm
searching for
part-time
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a part-time
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job,
i
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I
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saw your offer
in
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the website
, i
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. I
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would love to join your
resturant
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restaurant
. My name is Maryam,
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twenty four
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twenty-four
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years old. I
talk
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two languages,
english
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English
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and
arabic
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. Some of my
experience
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that
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have
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volunteered
in events about the importance of education.
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,
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joined to
students
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student
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club during
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apply
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collage
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college
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period
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apply
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.
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but not least,
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prefer
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five days a week from 8 am to 4 pm. All respect, Maryam aladwani

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language
Fix spell and grammar. Use simple form like I am and I would like the job.
structure
Put one idea in each line. Start with your wish to apply, then talk about exp, then your days.
tone
Be polite. Use a full closing like Yours sincerely and your name.
content
Give clear days and times, and check for misspelt word.
content
The goal to apply is clear.
timing
Time and days are given.
relevance
You mention language and work exp.
tone
Polite tone in parts of the letter.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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