You have bought some clothing online and are not satisfied with your purchase. Write a letter to the company that you bought the clothing from. In your email •give details of the purchase •describe the problem •explain why you need a replacement urgently

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Dear

sir

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Sir

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am writing

this

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letter to draw your attention .

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bought the clothes from

zara

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Zara

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but i

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am not satisfied

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purchase

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many

type

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types

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of clothes

there

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. There

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are 2 jeans

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shirts

and

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2 long coats

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am give

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my email on your online site

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[email protected]

you

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You

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can

cheak

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check

on mail .

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put all

detiles

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details

on your site .

there

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are problems

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all

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the cloathes

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cloathes

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clothes

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.in

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long

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coat

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coat,

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need

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an XL

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size

but

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the black

one

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apply

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coat

size

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is size

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shirts

which

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one staff

your

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site

say

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they

totely opesite

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totally opposite

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need full

cotten

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cotton

shirts

but

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you

send

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me silk

fiber

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need black

couler

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colour

but both

jeanes

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jeans

blue

couler

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colour

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goining

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going

the

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sister

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merrage

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marriage

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.that

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way

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way,

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can

bought

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buy

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black long coats

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need very urgently replacement for

cloaths

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clothes

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specially

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long

coat

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coats

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the

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black one only

suit

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with my

pant

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or shirt .

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hope you can

understant

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understand

my problem.

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can wait

your

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postive

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positive

response. your fathfully

mohinder singh brar

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Mohinder Singh Brar

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structure

Put one idea in each paragraph. Break the text into clear parts: what you bought, what is wrong, what you want.

greeting closing

Use proper start and end. Start with Dear Sir or Madam. End with Yours faithfully.

language

Make the long text short. Use short sentences. Do not use too many ideas in one line.

content

State the order number and date. Say you need a replacement soon.

content

You show you want a fix and tell why speed is needed.

content

You list the items bought.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

167 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

order number
order date
item
product
price
size
color
fit
delivered
faulty
defective
damaged
wrong
not as described
photos
packaging
return
return label
replacement
exchange
refund
money back
shipping
delivery
courier
tracking
customer service
contact
email
phone
urgent
ASAP
quick
response
policy

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