You have bought some clothing online and are not satisfied with your purchase.
Write a letter to the company that you bought the clothing from. In your email
•give details of the purchase
•describe the problem
•explain why you need a replacement urgently
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structure
Put one idea in each paragraph. Break the text into clear parts: what you bought, what is wrong, what you want.
greeting closing
Use proper start and end. Start with Dear Sir or Madam. End with Yours faithfully.
language
Make the long text short. Use short sentences. Do not use too many ideas in one line.
content
State the order number and date. Say you need a replacement soon.
content
You show you want a fix and tell why speed is needed.
content
You list the items bought.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
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