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The table below shows the transport usage for different reasons in UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the transport usage for different reasons in UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table compares how many
miles
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 people in the UK travel per week by different types of transport for four
purposes
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:
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work
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, shopping, social activities, and other
reasons
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.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 cars or taxis were the most commonly used transport for all
purposes
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,
then
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 bikes or
motor
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motorbikes
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 were used the least. People travelled the most
miles
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 for
work
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and
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, and
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 the other
reasons
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 were the least. In detail,
car
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the car
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 or taxi travelled a total of 623
miles
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 per week, with 201
miles
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 for
work
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, which was the highest one in the table. The distances for shopping and social
purposes
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 were
also
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 high, at 144 and 166
miles
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,
then
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 only 112
miles
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 were for other
reasons
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.
In contrast
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, people using bikes or motors travelled very short distances, just 23
miles
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 in total. The figures for
work
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, shopping, social, and other
reasons
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 were all under 10
miles
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. Public transport was used more than bikes or motors
but
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 still much less than cars, with a total of 68
miles
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 per week. Among these, 19
miles
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 were for other
purposes
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 and 17
miles
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 for social
reasons
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words miles, purposes, work, reasons with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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