The chart below shows the amount of energy generated from wind in four countries from 1985 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the amount of energy generated from wind in four countries from 1985 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the amount of energy generated from wind in four countries from 1985 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart gives information about
energy
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generated from wind in megawatts in four regions between 1985 and 2000.
Overall
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, the amount of
energy
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used in the US is higher than
other
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in other
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remaining
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countries over the years. In America, the
number
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amount
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for
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of
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energy
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uses
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used
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fluctuated
througout
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throughout
the years, and
its
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apply
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a
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the
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high
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highest
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amount of use was in 1990, with a number of 1500 megawatts. In Denmark, demand for the
energy
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generated from wind rose steadily, until it marked just over 1500, and
suppressed
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surpassed
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the US in the year
of
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2000. Other remaining countries,
such
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as India and
Germany
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Germany,
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saw an increase too. But in the year
of
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2000, the indicator of India rose dramatically, and marked a well-over of 500 megawatts.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • wind energy
  • energy
  • wind
  • country
  • year
  • period
  • increase
  • rise
  • rose
  • grow
  • grows
  • growing
  • highest
  • lowest
  • compare
  • compared
  • different
  • same
  • steady
  • gradual
  • sharp
  • rapid
  • slow
  • start
  • finish
  • by
  • from
  • to
  • during
  • over
  • trend
  • pattern
  • change
  • level
  • amount
  • growth
  • growth rate
  • gap
  • lead
  • leader
  • overall
  • despite
  • however
  • and
  • but
  • whereas
  • while
  • therefore
  • in addition
  • in contrast
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