The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of total spending on three categories, namely
food
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and
drink
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, restaurant and hotel, and
entertainment
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, among five
age
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groups in the UK in 2004.
Overall
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, younger people spent more on eating out,
while
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older people allocated a larger proportion of their expenses to
food
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and
drink
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as well as
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entertainment
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. The chart
also
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shows that spending priorities changed noticeably with
age
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. For those under 30, the highest proportion of spending, at about 15%, went to
restaurants
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and hotels,
while
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food
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and
drink
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and
entertainment
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accounted for lower shares, at nearly 6% and 8% respectively. A similar pattern was seen among the 31–45 group, though their spending was slightly more balanced across the three categories. From
age
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46 onwards, the pattern shifted. People between 46 and 60 spent the most on
food
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and
drink
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, with just under 17%, followed by
entertainment
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and
restaurants
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, both at around 13%.
This
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trend became even clearer for those aged 61–75, who spent around 20% on
food
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and
drink
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and 23% on
entertainment
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,
while
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restaurants
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dropped sharply to below 5%. Among the oldest group, those aged 76 and over,
food
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and
drink
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remained the largest category at 22%, followed by
entertainment
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at 14%. Expenditure on
restaurants
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was the lowest of all groups, at only about 7%. In conclusion,
while
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eating out was a priority for the youngest
age
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groups, older residents preferred to spend more on essential items like
food
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and
drink
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and leisure activities
such
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as
entertainment
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
Basic structure: Change the sixth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words food, drink, entertainment, age, restaurants with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the sixth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • spend
  • spending
  • money
  • cost
  • amount
  • category
  • age group
  • by age
  • across
  • in 2004
  • highest
  • lowest
  • more
  • less
  • increase
  • rise
  • grow
  • decrease
  • fall
  • change
  • vary
  • pattern
  • trend
  • overall
  • the chart shows
  • young
  • younger
  • older
  • middle aged
  • compare
  • comparison
  • spending on
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