The increase in the production of consumer consumption goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this and what can be done to solve this problem?

The increment in
products
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the production
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of consumption goods is damaging the
environment
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.
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is because there are a lot of
farms
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that send the
wastes
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waste
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to rivers or the sea
and
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, and
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,
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apply
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also
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the
use
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of
chemicals
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in agriculture. To solve these problems, the
government
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should
control
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the effluents in
farms
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and prohibit the
use
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of harmful
chemicals
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to seed the land. Turning
with
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to
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the causes, the effluents in milk
farms
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result in bad consequences to the
environment
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due
the
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to the
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contamination of sources of water. Every cow produces 20
liters
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litres
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of effluent
so
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, so
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,
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apply
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in
farms
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that have at least 200
hundred
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apply
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cows to produce milk, the daily production of waste is significant. In Argentina, where there are a lot of dairy
farms
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, the
control
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of effluents is a challenge.
Farms
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have like vaults where all the effluent goes and
then
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are
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is
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treated before to send the waste to the river or lagoons. Another cause of
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environment
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environmental
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damage is the
chemicals
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used to prepare the soil to seed. The
use
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of insecticides or herbicides
produce
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produces
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severe problems in the
environment
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and people. In Argentina, a company
call
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Monsanto
,
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was sued by the
government
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because of the
use
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of glyphosate
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, that
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that
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which
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has given cancer to many people and countryside workers. To solve
this
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problem, the
government
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should play an important role
control
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by law the
use
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of
chemicals
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and
punish
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punishing
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the
farms
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and companies that
use
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illegal products that could damage the
environment
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. In
Australia
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Australia,
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the
use
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of glyphosate is penalty by law
and
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, and
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the
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users
not only could
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could not only
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go to
the
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jail,
although
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they could lose
the
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their
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companies or
the
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apply
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farms
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.
To conclude
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, the increment in population and the increase
of
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in
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goods consumption bring a big problem for the
environment
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and people.
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, if the
government
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control
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controls
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by law the excessive
use
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of
chemicals
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and wastes, these problems could be reduced in the short
time
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term
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.

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structure
Plan an intro that states what you will discuss, then two clear parts: causes and fixes. End with a short result.
coherence
Use easy links to join ideas. Words like 'first', 'then', 'also', 'but', 'so' help the flow.
content
Give a cause and then a detail or example for each. Then give a fix and a detail for each.
vocabulary
Write with simple words. Avoid hard terms. If you must use a new word, explain it.
grammar
Check grammar and make short sentences. Watch verb and plural forms.
examples
Use only a few good examples and explain how they show the reason or fix.
strength
The idea is clear: more goods can harm air and water.
strength
There is a plan for a rule as a fix.
strength
Some real places are used as examples.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumer consumption goods
  • natural environment
  • single-use products
  • waste
  • deforestation
  • biodiversity
  • pollution
  • manufacturing processes
  • emissions
  • wastewater
  • landfill sites
  • habitat destruction
  • unsustainable use
  • natural resources
  • recycling
  • circular economy
  • stricter environmental regulations
  • eco-friendly materials
  • sustainable production methods
  • educating consumers
  • environmental impact
  • purchasing decisions
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