The chart below shows the precentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

The chart below shows the precentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the precentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
The bar chart gives information about the UK's rate of owned and rented housing for families from 1918 to 2011.
It is clear that
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households in owned and rented housing have opposite
trend
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trends
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across the years, where the ratio has
converge
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by
end
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the end
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of the time period. The percentage of
owing
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owning
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accomodation
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accommodation
soared over the years, from 24% in 1918 to almost 70% in 2001, it
then
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slightly went down to 64% in 2011.
However
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, households in rented accommodation plummeted from 78% in 1918 to 32% in 2001, followed by a modest increase of 4% from 2001 to 2011.
In
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the beginning of the time period, the percentage difference between owned and rented
household
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households
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is larger, where families with owned accommodation
is
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are
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56% less than
that
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those
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of
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with
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rented accommodation.
Nonetheless
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, their ratio converged in 2011, with the rate of rented only 28% less than owned.

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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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