A building company is planning to build new houses on some land near where you live , and has asked the public for comments. Write a letter to the manager of the building company in your letter + say how you heard about the building company’s plan + give your opinion of the plan + say what you hope the building company will do

Dear Sir or Madam My name is Luan , I am writing to express my

wait

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worry

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when the listening building company is planning to build new houses here . I heard from a notice on the community central and a discussion in our local resident meeting . To be honest , I want the building company to maintain green spaces in the area and have a small park

where

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that

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has many trees or

sport

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sports

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facilities .

This

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can encourage local people to play sports and do exercise , it can serve as an efficient way to improve public well-being , it plays a critical role in improving both physical and mental

stay

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apply

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health and enhances my stamina ,

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besides

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besides,

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it helps individuals improve cardiovascular fitness. I hope that your company will receive

authorities'

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the authorities'

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permit and carry out your plans as soon as possible . I am looking forward to hearing from you . Sincerely . Mr luan

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Sep 16, 2025

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organization

Use a clear plan. Put intro, body, and end in clear parts. Each idea should come in its own paragraph.

style

Keep a calm and formal tone. Try not to mix long ideas in one long line. Use simple, short sentences.

grammar

Fix small errors. 'wait' should be 'concern'; 'breathing' no. Keep names and titles correct; end with a full name.

content

Be clear on what you heard, what you think, and what you want the firm to do. Stick to three points.

tone

The letter asks for a view on the plan with a polite start and end.

content

The idea of green space and a park is easy to see and felt.

intent

You say you hope to hear back soon.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

157 words

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