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The diagram below shows the various stages involved in publishing a book. Summarise the iformation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the various stages involved in publishing a book. Summarise the iformation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram explains
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a
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 process of publishing a book. There are
total
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 of ten stages in the process, beginning with writing the
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 and culminating in the distribution to the bookshops.
To begin
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, the writer
write
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 down the
text
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, and
then
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 the written
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 will be
send
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 to the publishing houses. At the publishing house, the
text
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then will
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will then
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 be studied by editors. If the editor
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agrees
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 with the
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, there will be a contract made between the writer and the publishing house. As soon as the contract was
dealed
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sealed
, they started to make the design of
layout
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the layout
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. Once the design
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 done
an
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 no more
revision
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, they will move to the next steps,
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that
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which
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 is printing the final decision on
layout
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the layout
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. After all the
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were
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 printed, they
are
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then
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binded
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bound
 with care, and became
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very nice books. In the end, all of the books will be distributed to the bookshops
,
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 and will be sold there.

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