The pie charts compare the proportions of different energy sources used in Australia in 2008 with predictions for 2030.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie charts compare the proportions of different energy sources used in Australia in 2008 with predictions for 2030.

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, coal is expected to remain the dominant source of energy,

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oil will experience only a slight decline.

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, gas, solar, and wind are projected to increase significantly,

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hydro power is forecast to decrease sharply. In 2008, coal accounted for the largest share at 34%, followed by oil at 30%. Gas contributed 19%,

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hydro represented 9% of total energy consumption. Solar and wind were the smallest sources, together making up only 8%. By 2030, coal is predicted to maintain its leading position at 32%, slightly lower than in 2008. Oil is expected to fall marginally to 29%,

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gas will rise considerably to 25%, becoming the second-largest source. Solar and wind are

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anticipated to expand, reaching a combined 11%, compared with their relatively low levels in 2008.

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, hydro will drop dramatically to just 3%, showing the largest proportional decrease among all sources.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

149 words

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The pie charts compare the proportions of different energy sources used in Australia in 2008 with predictions for 2030.

Many university graduates cannot find a job in their chosen profession. What factors may have caused this situation and what in your opinion should be done about it? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people think museums and art galleries should show works of art and history from their own country rather than from different parts of the world. Do you agree or disagree ?

Semi-Formal Letter Prompt: "You recently attended a workshop and would like to thank the organizer. Write a letter to the organizer. In your letter, you should: 1.Express your gratitude for the workshop. 2.Describe what you learned or found valuable. 3.Suggest how the workshop could be improved."

In many parts of the world today there is a profitable market for products which lighten or whiten people's skin. Outline the reasons for using such products and discuss what effects they have in terms of health and society.

In many countries nowadays, consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?