You have moved to another city but your bank has your old address and continues to send all communication there. Write a letter to your bank branch. In the letter, mention: •Where have you moved? •What problem are you facing regarding the bank’s communication? •What you want them to do regarding old communication already sent to the wrong address.

Dear Sir, I hope
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letter finds you well and in the best spirits. I am writing
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letter to give you an update about my current
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. So that I will get all letters and notices over there. My name is Sam. Recently I moved from
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Toronto
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to Surrey. My new
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is 12183 77A Avenue, Scottsdale, Surrey. I moved here for better employment opportunities.
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the
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-minute move, I did not get time to visit the
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. Because of that, all the important documents and notices, sent by the
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to my previous mailing
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. Unfortunately, I lost one cheque sent by the
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to the given
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. I humbly request
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to
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update my current
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in the
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system. I do not want to lose any kind of important information.
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, kindly let me know
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I need to provide proof of
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or identification?
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you forward all those documents to my new
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? I am looking forward to hearing from you soon! Yours sincerely, Sam.

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Fix small grammar and make each paragraph hold one clear idea. Use short, easy words.
structure
Put the main aim in the first lines. Then add one idea per paragraph and use simple links like also and then to flow.
tone
Polite tone and good close.
content
Clear ask to update address and forward mail.
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You ask to keep mail safe and not miss mail.
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