The pie charts show energy sources in Australia in 2008 and predictions for 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie charts show energy sources in Australia in 2008 and predictions for 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the number of efficiency sources in Australia in 2008 and predictions for 2030.

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, it is evident that coal is the highest figure,

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in 2003, oil was predicted to be the primary power source.

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, the lowest of power sources is hydro and will remain in 2030. Regarding these popular energies. In 2008,

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pie chart experienced coal leads with 39%,

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percentage will decrease significantly in 2030 to 22,3%. Following the level of oil and gas by 32,5%, 22,9% respectively, which will become

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largest proportion in 2030 to 35,5% and 32% respectively. As for these rare energy sources, other energy accounted for 4,3% in 2008 and still

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percentage in 2030. For these smallest number is wind and hydro accounted for 0,3% and 0,2% respectively. In 2030, the percentages will increase slightly to 0,9% and 0,7% respectively.

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, there is a new energy is

geothermal

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accounting

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, accounting

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for 4,3%.

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Sep 23, 2025

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

155 words

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