The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The line graph demonstrates the proportion of UK people following a vegetarian diet over the period from 1960 to 2020.
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, the total count grew sharply at
first,
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then
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declined for several decades, and
finally
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started to rise again in the 21st century. In 1960, the idea of being vegetarian was almost absent in British society, but by
1980
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1980,
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the number of vegetarians
increased
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had increased
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dramatically and reached its peak at 15 per
cent
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. After that, the graph shows a clear downward trend. The figure dropped significantly during the 1980s and 1990s,
although
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there were some minor fluctuations,
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as small rises in 1992 to 8 per
cent
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and in 1998 to 6 per
cent
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. In 1997, the rate fell to its lowest point of only 4 per
cent
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. With the arrival of the twenty-first century, the
amount
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of vegetarians in the UK began to increase again. By 2010, it reached 13 per
cent
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, almost regaining the earlier peak, before stabilising with slight reductions towards 2020.

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