Methods of transporation for people travelling to one university for work or study in 2004 and 2009 in the UK. The two pie charts compare five categories of UK travelling percentage of university (train, bicycle, bus, walking, car,) from 2004 to 2009) Units are measured in proportion.

Methods of transporation for people travelling to one university for work or study in 2004 and 2009 in the UK. The two pie charts compare five categories of UK travelling percentage of university (train, bicycle, bus, walking, car,) from 2004 to 2009) Units are measured in proportion.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for Methods of transporation for people travelling to one university for work or study in 2004 and 2009 in the UK. The two pie charts compare five categories of UK travelling percentage of university (train, bicycle, bus, walking, car,) from 2004 to 2009) Units are measured in proportion.
These two pie charts illustrate the methods of transportation for individuals
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who are travelling in the UK to the university for work or studies between 2004 and 2009.
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, the development from 2004 to 2009 is clear
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The primary use of cars in travel was significant,
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public transit was not very popular. In 2009, the situation reversed; the car pattern decreased, and
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marked the beginning of the rise in public transportation. In 2004, nearly half of the travellers commuted by car to work or university,
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train consumption dropped to just 3%. A small share of
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be observed in walking, only 1% higher than that of the train. It is noteworthy that the bicycle accounted for just one quarter of the bus’s share in 2004.
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, by 2009, the levels of train use and walking remained stable, with only a slightly higher application, around 1–2%. The major shift occurred in car travel, which fell to one quarter,
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the share of the public bus rose to 46%.
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, cycling nearly doubled its proportion during
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period, reaching 16%.

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